2023年10月7日雅思考试写作回顾

小作文： 静态图（柱状图）

大作文： Some people say that mobile phones should not be allowed in public places. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

朗阁讲师点评

1.本次考试 难度中等。

2.整体分析：

Task 1：静态图（bar）柱状图是有关英国不同年龄段的人的生活开销（娱乐/餐饮/住宿）的百分比。

注意：1. 静态图要注意审题，避免大意从而写成动态图，年龄之间对应的数据不可以描述成增长的概念，容易跑题。2. 注意正文段落是否将不同年龄段之间的的关系所呈现的特点清晰展示出来。3.静态图要注意对比关系的多样性表达，同时有整体的概括型，不可写成流水账。相关表达：

1. A +比较级+ than + B with 数据1 and 数据2 respectively

2. A +be动词+数据1，which +be动词+比较级+B（数据2）

3. A+最高级+with+数据+among all the +剩余对象

Task 2 ：社会类

题目翻译：有人认为手机在公共场所应该被禁止使用。对此你在何种程度同意或不同意？

该话题非常接近生活，内容对于考生而言有充足的发挥空间，需要考生注意一些相关话题词的规范使用，保证充足的论据，从而分别进行论证。要区分不同论点，不要写重复，要注意对于问题的回应是否充足，一般在同意与否类型的题目中，倾向于写部分同意的写法更容易发挥，但本题也适合写成持不同意的立场。以下推荐一个四段式的写法：

第一段：题目改写，给出观点

Mobile phones have become an essential part of daily activity. Due to the increased practice of mobile phones, it is often argued that there should be a regulation to restrict it in public areas. I completely disagree with the statement and the reasons for the same have been discussed below. 

第二段：论证手机不应该在公众场所禁用的原因

Nowadays, cellular devices offer an array of features apart from communication. It serves as a map, an encyclopedia, or transportation ticket. （手机如今已经不仅仅是交流工具，同时也具有很多其他与生活相关的功能）Furthermore, it is a mode of communication, and also serves as a translator.(手机可以起到翻译机的功能） Public places such as libraries maintain a strict atmosphere, but it could be manageable by muting the device.（虽然在一些公共场合需要安静，但手机也可以调为静音模式） Moreover, smartphones also serves as a notepad or reminder, for instance, when shopping an individual can simply type the list of items needed rather than writing it on paper, or keep a reminder for any future purposes. (手机也可以起到记事簿或备忘录的功能）Lastly, the advent of e-tickets has made many people rely on their cell phone for commuting.（最后，手机随着电子应用的发展，可以有电子票等用途）

第三段：承认手机有时候会带来不好的后果

On the other hand, people get extremely engrossed in their cellular devices and this could be harmful; for example, it is often advised to not use smartphone while travelling as it could lead to accidents.(手机的过度使用有时候会转移注意力，从来带来事故） Additionally, people should be encouraged to limit the use of smart phones and involve themselves in their surroundings more.（所以，合理的方式是根据周边环境适度使用手机）

第四段：总结

In conclusion, `laws like these seems harsh owing to the necessity of cellular devices. Nevertheless, overuse of smartphones is spiking these days, and so people should try to curb This trend by educating and motivating others to limit the use of mobile devices and practise physical interaction often.

考试建议

1.小作文：重点关注饼图、线图。

2.大作文：重点关注工作，政府类话题。

3.重点浏览2018,2019年写作机经，可借助《**范文书》第8版经典旧题来复习。